For my second newsletter evaluation, I will look at Alsop High’s
newsletter. The first notable aspect of the front cover is that aside from the
logos at the bottom, it is completely black and white, which creates a very
boring looking front cover regardless of audience, and risks disinteresting the
reader immediately. Like the Deyes newsletter, the page begins with a message
from the head teacher, however this one is shorter and more concise than the
Deyes message, helping to make the page look less text heavy despite the fact
that there are nearly no images on the page. The image beside the message is of
the school; however inside the same box as the image is the date of the
newsletters release, though there is a lot of blank space underneath it not
being used. This has made me realise that I should more carefully consider my
image placement in correlation to my text, as it could potentially lead to
wasted white space. Below are a list of relevant dates to the students, which
like the message from the head is presented nice and concisely. The rest of the
pages text is divided up with sub-headings nicely enough so that the newsletter
looks professional without presenting the reader with one long boring chunk of
text consuming the bottom half of the page. The content consists of updates on
recent school events such as the national science week, as well as of school
regulations regarding uniforms, jewellery, punctuality and so forth. This
content suggests that the newsletter is aimed more towards the older students
than the parents but without directly addressing them, and by presenting this
information to them in a mature format like this, the student readers wouldn’t feel
patronised (though on the other hand, a formal layout like this, plain text and
lack of colours may even discourage older students from reading this). Overall,
this newsletter front cover has been very helpful to me in that it has given me
reason to think about the placement of my text and images and how I present my
text.

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