"Faves" not "fav's" surely... and does this fit with the image your magazine is supposed to have as more sophisticated? But then I see a hoody and I'm confused as to just how sophisticated it really is?
Is this top bar a tagline for the magazine? Or is it linking to an article inside? I'm confused!
What music should I expect from The Canvas - the name is very vague so you need to anchor the genre somehow in your tagline.
I would suggest also adding a text box to the top right of your blog in the style of Jonathan's or Zoe's blogs, explaining an obscure title to a stranger and how it links in with your chosen genre (as frankly I have no idea)
Spelling: "Industry"
No font variation at all. Consider your research.
Bottom strapline is confusing. Is it one item on there or two? How can you show this easier?
Please consider these factors John and amend where needed.
"Faves" not "fav's" surely... and does this fit with the image your magazine is supposed to have as more sophisticated? But then I see a hoody and I'm confused as to just how sophisticated it really is?
ReplyDeleteIs this top bar a tagline for the magazine? Or is it linking to an article inside? I'm confused!
What music should I expect from The Canvas - the name is very vague so you need to anchor the genre somehow in your tagline.
I would suggest also adding a text box to the top right of your blog in the style of Jonathan's or Zoe's blogs, explaining an obscure title to a stranger and how it links in with your chosen genre (as frankly I have no idea)
Spelling: "Industry"
No font variation at all. Consider your research.
Bottom strapline is confusing. Is it one item on there or two? How can you show this easier?
Please consider these factors John and amend where needed.